svetikya Chapter 125
Chapter 125
"Bang!"
Lin Yi turned into a golden light and knocked a large hole into the primordial demon's body.
"No way, I'm the Primordial Demon, I killed the forty-nine Enlightened Beings, I can't lose..."
Just after the Primordial Demon fell, a holy light lit up between the heavens and the earth, opening an ancient gate.
The two walked in together.
Inside, there was a singing of birds and flowers, and a statue with a sword stood tall.
Underneath the statue is a line of writing.
"The Adjudicator, the supreme being of the entire universe, but only one person can be the Adjudicator.
When they saw this line of words, Xiao Zhantian and Lin Yi were stunned at the same time, turned their heads to look at each other, and understood something at this moment.
The two of them had war burning in their eyes, and they raised their fists and rushed towards each other frantically.
At the same time, the gates of the Land of Judgment slowly closed.
The
'crackling' sound of the keyboard came to an abrupt end.
Looking at the flashing cursor on the computer screen, Lin Yi let out a long sigh of relief.
"Whew!"
""The Return of the Heavenly Venerable of the City" is finally over. "
Little darlings, let me see your finishing flowers!" Lin
Yi sat on the chair and was full of ambition for several minutes.
He wrote this book for three whole years, how many three years have he had in his life?
He picked up a glass of water and drank water, while clicking on the comment area expectantly.
"That's the end of the dog author, there are still a lot of holes that haven't been filled.
"You can write a der of the 108 harems that you said! "
Agree with the upstairs! "
This book is really forcibly fed, licked by dogs until there is nothing left, and it is disgusting.
"Write Nima chicken feathers! Lao Tzu writes better than you."
"This book is so poisonous, don't read it. "
Thank you to the brother upstairs for testing the poison, fortunately, I read the comments wittily first, and slipped away~
" "Nima!The dog author got out, the ending is too sadistic, if you don't change Lao Tzu's backhand, a report!" "
What the hell is written!So many beautiful heroines don't push, from beginning to end, they only know how to fight with Xiao Zhantian, dog author, are you sick?" "I'm
about to be, who has a quick-acting heart-saving pill?"
Dog authors, don't open new books, you're not suitable for writing novels, go find a class.
Lin
Yi was so angry that he sprayed a mouthful of water directly on the keyboard.
Looking at these unfriendly book reviews in disbelief.
"I've been writing this book for three years, do you know how I've spent the last three years?"
"You can write, take the keyboard.
"Little bastards, when Lao Tzu coded words, you were still wearing open crotch pants.
Lin 'crackled' his fingers on the keyboard.
As an old Zuan, no one is allowed to spray better than himself.
I don't know if it was because it was too fast, or because of the water that had entered it before, white smoke rose from the keyboard.
"Bang!"
With a pop, the keyboard exploded directly.
At the same time, his body disappeared into the room.
On the computer screen, a sentence is displayed that has not been completed.
"Nima, Shen Ma Dong..."
...
The sky is tilting, the sun is shining, and the birds are singing and the flowers are fragrant.
Inside a red Ferrari, a young man is slowly waking up.
"Young master, wake up, school has arrived. A
respectful voice came.
Lin Yi shuddered all over his body and opened his eyes.
Looking at the housekeeper beside him, and the familiar school gate in front of him, he remembered the opening plot of his novel.
"Damn! I'm stuck in a novel.
At the same time, the screen of a live broadcast room appeared in front of his eyes, and the voice of the system's sister came from his ears.
Congratulations to the host, get the text change and become a stronger system. [
You can go through any plot node to change the text.]
[Only if you change this book to the satisfaction of the readers, can you return to the original world.
He looked at the comment section and it was full of comments from readers scolding and squirming about the plot of the book.
Under the guidance of the system's sister, he slowly got out of the car and decided to change the plot of the first act first according to the reader's request.
He found that the system was quite strong, and he could choose to change the text at any point in the book.
"Okay, okay, isn't it just pushing the heroine? No problem, look at me.
He tidied up his clothes and stood at the gate, waiting for Colonel Tang to come out.
As for whether he can change it to the satisfaction of readers and return to the original world, it's another story.
(End of book).